Preliminary exercise LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full. great camerawork + focus. Excellent to see so many closups Music is stranger things (or perhaps blade runner 2049) I think too recent to use it, hard to think of anything else except S.T. once hear it. One to be considered for the real thing Performances perhaps a little shaky at the start but gets better Brilliant use of enigma: not showing the audience the villain works so well. Simple but a classic horror convention The second scene arguably better... great use of effects and editing. eyes are so creepy: very well done! almost works like a trailer already audio levels not quite right 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and your teacher feedback, write three WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and three EBI bullet points (Even Better If...) for your film. WWW: Editing was good the camerawork was also effective enigma codes were effective and created mystery EBI The p